The morning sun cast long shadows over the Chen village as Chen Mo stepped out with his gear, the familiar weight of his bow resting against his shoulder. His bag held the remaining pelts from the previous week, and his mind was focused. The panel read Archery 75/200, a steady increase from yesterday, reminding him that consistency was everything. Today, he planned to venture slightly farther along the mountain outskirts, where small game was plentiful but risks were higher.
As he rounded the village path, he caught sight of the clan chief leading a small group of adults and a donkey carriage loaded with pelts. They were heading toward the county for the weekly market run. Chen Mo watched for a moment, noting the organized rhythm of their movement. The chief’s eyes flicked toward him briefly, a nod of acknowledgment passing between them. Even the seasoned hunters had to maintain precision and discipline; Chen Mo reminded himself he had to match that same level, if only in his own small way.
The mountains stretched before him in shades of green and brown, dotted with jagged rocks and thorny undergrowth. Streams trickled between the stones, and the wind carried distant birdcalls. He moved carefully, scanning for movement, avoiding snapping twigs or rustling leaves that might warn prey.
Soon, he spotted a small hare near a thicket. He nocked an arrow and drew the bow, adjusting his posture. The shot wavered slightly, but the arrow struck true. “Archery +1.” Encouraged, he adjusted for the next attempt, missing once, then hitting another target successfully. “+1.” By mid-morning, his panel read 80/200, a slow but steady climb.
A pheasant fluttered from a nearby bush, teasing him with sudden, unpredictable movements. He retrieved an arrow carefully, noting the importance of conserving every one. Another fox darted across a rocky path, its sleek fur tempting him to risk a longer shot, but experience told him the danger wasn’t worth it. He let it go, focusing instead on targets he could reliably strike.
Hours passed. The sun climbed high, and Chen Mo’s muscles ached, but each success reinforced the patterns in his body: stance, draw, breath, and release. He imagined years of training compressed into these few hours, each arrow imprinting lessons into his memory. By the time he decided to return home, he had gathered enough for his meals and a small surplus of tradeable pelts, and the panel read 85/200.
On the path back, he saw the chief’s donkey carriage returning from the county, a few pelts already sold, new sacks of grain replacing them. Chen Mo felt a quiet reassurance; the village’s system of survival was clear, predictable, and now he had a role within it. As he approached his hut, he planned the evening: rest, eat, and continue refining his skill. Each day brought small victories, but they were victories nonetheless, shaping both his body and his future.
Another week passed in the mountains and forests surrounding Chen village. Each day followed the same rigorous rhythm: early morning rises, careful preparation, venturing into the outskirts, hunting for small game, retrieving arrows, and returning before dusk. Chen Mo’s body adapted quickly. His arms grew stronger from drawing the bow repeatedly, his legs firmer from climbing rocky paths, and his appetite increased to match the exertion. By now, he was no longer the pale, frail boy the villagers had seen a fortnight ago; the steady diet of meat, grains, and occasional salted vegetables had added muscle and weight.
Throughout the week, the panel tracked his progress meticulously. Each correct shot, each consistent repetition of his form, flashed “Archery +1”. By the end of the week, Chen Mo checked his panel: Archery 145/200. The growth was slower than he had hoped, but steady, disciplined, and reliable—exactly what he needed to survive.
With a small bundle of pelts collected over the week, Chen Mo made his way back to the village to deliver them to the chief. He found the clan chief inspecting the granary, counting grain sacks and reviewing notes of sales to the county.
“Ah, Chen Mo,” the chief greeted warmly, eyeing the young hunter’s haul. “You’ve done well again. These pelts will fetch about 260 coins this week—good work.”
Chen Mo placed the bundle on the table, bowing slightly. “Thank you, chief. I… I’ll continue to work hard.”
The chief gave a small nod, voice serious. “Remember, the bandit toll is due in two weeks. Each household must contribute one tael. If you find yourself short, don’t hesitate. I’ll cover your share. Just focus on your training and hunting. Discipline now saves you from risk later.”
Chen Mo’s chest tightened with gratitude. “I… thank you, chief. I won’t forget this.”
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With that, he turned and headed back to his hut, the afternoon sun warming his back. Inside, he carefully cleaned his gear, and reflected on the week. 145/200, the panel reminded him. Slow progress, yes, but growth nonetheless. Tomorrow, he would rise again, continuing the same rhythm that had begun to shape him—not just as a hunter, but as a young man carving a place for himself in this unforgiving world.
The morning air was crisp as Chen Mo adjusted the strap of his bag, preparing for another day in the outskirts of the mountains. From the edge of the village, he noticed Elder Chen Huang leading a small group of children toward the forests to gather herbs. The elder moved with measured steps, but his voice carried authority, calling out instructions to the youngsters behind him.
“Keep your eyes sharp and your hands steady! Don’t waste time on weeds—each herb we gather has value,” Chen Huang admonished, pausing briefly to glance at Chen Mo. “And you, young hunter, your dedication is impressive. Keep this pace. Discipline now will serve you for years.”
Chen Mo bowed deeply, feeling a wave of respect and guilt. “Thank you, Elder Chen Huang. I… I won’t forget your kindness. I should have visited sooner to properly thank you for all you’ve done.”
The elder’s expression softened, and a faint smile appeared beneath his weathered features. “It’s alright, boy. Everyone’s life is tight these days. You’ve done well just by keeping your focus. That’s enough.”
With a final nod, Chen Mo turned to leave, his bow and arrows secured, ready for the day’s hunt. As he stepped onto the path leading toward the mountains, he almost collided with Chen Tie and his hunting team, returning from their early scouting trip.
“Chen Mo,” Chen Tie called, his voice carrying both warmth and authority. “I’ve heard of your progress—impressive work. Keep this up, and next time, come with us on a hunting trip. You’ll gain more experience, and maybe you can give my son some pointers.”
Chen Gou stiffened beside his father, his jaw tightening. He had accompanied Chen Tie before, but his own hunting attempts had been clumsy, more burden than help. Hearing the suggestion that Chen Mo might instruct him only deepened the weight of inadequacy he felt.
Chen Mo inclined his head respectfully. “Thank you, Master Chen Tie. I’ll be ready when the time comes.”
The elder hunter nodded, satisfied, and the team continued on their way toward the mountains, leaving Chen Mo with a renewed sense of purpose. He adjusted his pack, took a deep breath, and set off, the forest awaiting him and another day of steady, disciplined progress stretching before him.
The sun was dipping behind the mountains as Chen Mo returned to the village, his bag heavier than usual. The day’s hunt had been fruitful—hares, pheasants, and a few smaller birds—and by his calculations, if the week continued like this, he would likely gather over 300 coins by the end. The thought of steady progress warmed him quietly, even if he still felt no true sense of belonging.
On the way home, he passed by Elder Chen Huang’s hut, where Chen Shun and a few other children were lingering near the doorway, curiously watching him approach. Chen Mo stopped, placing a freshly hunted pheasant on the steps.
“Good evening, madam,” he said, bowing slightly as the elder’s wife appeared, surprise lighting her face. “Please accept this gift. I wanted to thank you both for your care in the past.”
The woman smiled warmly, taking the pheasant. “You’ve grown strong, Chen Mo. Very strong and thoughtful, too.”
Chen Shun piped up shyly, his young eyes bright. “Wow… Chen Mo, you’re amazing! I hope I can hunt like that one day.”
Chen Mo gave the boy a small, polite nod. “Keep practicing. You’ll get there.”
Chen Huang’s wife chuckled softly. “The boy is courteous, at least. That’s worth more than you realize.”
“I must be excused,” Chen Mo said, bowing once more. “I need to sleep early tonight to prepare for tomorrow’s hunt.” With a final glance at the small group, he turned and continued toward his hut.
Once inside, he carefully set down the bag, cleaned his bow, and checked the panel. Archery 155/200—a steady climb, reflecting every correct shot, every arrow retrieved, and each day of disciplined effort.
He leaned back on his bed, contemplating the coming days. If he kept this pace, he estimated minor achievement in archery could be reached within five days. By then, he could either join the clan hunting team for guidance or venture deeper into the mountains on his own. He allowed himself a small smile. Discipline, patience, and careful planning—these were slowly carving a path forward.

