Chapter 4: Dark and Low Clouds
“When the wind stops speaking and the reindeer look to the sky, the
thunder is already awake.”
Those were the signs the nomadic
peoples used to detect when the formation of a storm was imminent.
The city of Tomsk, surrounded by conifer forests
buried under white snow, grew restless at the end of winter in that
boreal woodland where the great changes of humankind had once been
born.
In these lands once ruled by Scythians, Huns, Tatars, and
Mongols, massive migrations—driven by tribal disputes,
climate shifts, and imperial expansions—had shifted the very axis
of civilization between East and West.
Captain Alexander Viktorovich had been uneasy for
weeks. Each night, thoughts about the strange behavior of the blue
spirits robbed him of sleep. When he did manage to rest, his
dreams multiplied into distorted, incomprehensible visions.
He understood nothing. At only thirty-four, he felt as though he
had thrown away both his military career and his life. Worst of all,
he kept delaying the moment he would have to tell his father—the
Artillery General Viktor Mikhailovich Bondarenko.
Perhaps he should speak first with his mother, Natalia,
or his sister, Yelena. From his window, he watched
the cadets complete their drills with the same enthusiasm he once
had. He decided to wait and think—there were too many shadows in
that story.
His thoughts were interrupted by a phone call. When he saw the
name on the screen, his pulse quickened and his face flushed with
tension. His throat tightened. Before answering, he opened the window
to breathe in the cold, pure air.
—Alexander, —a woman’s voice came through the line—
it’s Inessa. I suppose you remember me.
—At
your service, Lieutenant Colonel Arkadyevna Serova, —he
replied formally, using her surnames.
—Relax, she
said. There’s no need to be so formal. Remember, I’m the
defense attorney you chose. I’m glad you did; we have things in
common. I also served in the paratrooper corps, where you began your
career.
—I’m honored to be represented by such a
distinguished military lawyer, he replied.
—I’m
afraid I have bad news, —her voice deepened, her words spaced
out to be better understood— the date has been set: May 5th, in
the Gorno-Altaysk Military Court. The proceedings will begin then.
I’ve sent you an email with all the details.
—It
will be an honor to attend, he said quietly.
—I have
worse news, she added. The assigned prosecutor is Colonel
Igor Leonidovich Saranin. They call him “The Crow.” He
specializes in expelling “weak” or undisciplined elements.
They ended the call, and Alexander immediately opened his computer
to read the email. It was an official document, stamped with the
seals of the regional military authorities. It listed the
participants in the process and cited the articles of military law
under which they were being summoned.
The phone rang again—this time it was his younger sister,
Yelena. Her gentle, calm voice soothed him. Looking
out the window, he watched a military convoy leaving the barracks.
The air was still; not a trace of wind.
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—Kashtan misses you, —she said, referring to his
Samoyed dog— we all do. How are you?
—Disappointed
and frustrated, —he whispered weakly. I’m not even sure
where all this is heading.
—I warned you, Yelena
reminded him. They’ll never forgive that Dad took part in the
coup against Gorbachev to stop the dissolution of the USSR.
—That
has nothing to do with this, he said, trying to escape that
reasoning.
When the call ended, memories of that violent time flooded back
like an unstoppable cascade. His father, General Bondarenko, had been
implicated in that plot.
The result was humiliation—retirement without honors,
despite having been decorated for severe mutilation
during the Soviet campaign in Afghanistan, where he lost his left leg
to a mine in Kunar Province.
He needed air. He needed to uncover the truth about what had
happened at the Tavan Bogd pass, the route
connecting China’s Altai region with the Ukok Plateau in Russia.
He opened his folder, where he had collected notes from the
expedition. The military map, marked in red, traced the path along
the eastern side of Lake Teletskoye, climbing
between Mount Belukha and Juiten Peak.
And there, on the Ukok Plateau, the final
point—buried deep in snow and ice. Barely fifty kilometers
separated them from the refuge in the alpine valleys and the mountain
pass of Chapchan-Daban.
The brigade’s central command had provided coordinates up until
just before the accident. His friend Alexei, the
second-in-command of the expedition, had been in charge of
communications.
Moments earlier, they had carefully studied the terrain to avoid
traps. Fear of brittle ice over rivers and lakes pushed them higher,
and along those slopes they tried to avoid rockslides or fissures.
That afternoon, the sky darkened unusually fast. The eastern wind
ceased its insolence. They thought perhaps an anticyclonic window was
opening, allowing them to cross the pass—nearly two thousand meters
high—in peace.
They checked the weather reports. Nothing suggested danger. But
they forgot the ancient wisdom of the high steppe dwellers, who could
foresee when harsh winter storms were about to descend.
The route became blocked. No radio signals. No GPS. Nothing. They
searched the maps, unsure of their exact position. In such
circumstances, there is only one choice: go on—to
descend or freeze to death.
Did he do the right thing? Or had fear clouded his reason, driving
him to make a fatal mistake? Had he truly failed in a moment of
crisis…
Or, as his sister claimed, had someone made him fail?
Then he remembered the radio program—the university professor.
Her book was titled “The Soul of the Taiga.”
Perhaps it held answers about those strange blue spirits he
had felt holding him back just before he fell into the pit.
He wandered the snowy streets. On his phone, he searched for
nearby bookstores and called to ask about the book. No success—his
anxiety grew. His only chance was slipping away like a fish between
his fingers.
Just as he was about to give up, the cheerful voice of a clerk
from the Knigi Bookstore rekindled his hope:
—We don’t have that book, but you might find it at the
Tomskaya Library. Most university professors’ works are archived
there. The address is Lenin Avenue, 111.
From where he stood, he moved toward the first stretch of Lenin
Avenue. After only a few meters, he saw in the distance the
grand white building with tall columns—Tomsk Federal
University.
Maybe it was better to meet the professor in person and talk to
her. And so he did. He entered the building and asked for her. A kind
young man, noticing his limp, took pity on him and helped him look.
One of the custodians told him the professor was teaching at the
Institute of Archaeology and Social Sciences.
The
chapter closes without resolution, leaving Alexander at the
threshold of finding the mysterious professor who might explain the
secret of the blue spirits that saved him from
death.
Emotionally, the chapter deepens his inner
collapse—haunted by guilt, family disgrace, and the ghosts
of the past—while setting up the next step: the search for
answers in Tomsk University, where the supernatural and
scientific threads will start to intertwine.
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