Chapter 24: Three options
Outside the east wing chamber, Lord Eldric lurked in the shadows of the hall, arms crossed over his chest, listening to the storm behind the door.
At first, his face was a hard, sculpted mask of disapproval, the deep lines of wear and war making his disappointment unmistakable. The boy had broken the rules. Again. And this time, he'd brought others into the manor in the middle of the gods-damned night. Four strangers—freedfolk, no less—slipping through the hedgerow like ghosts. Aldric knew better. Or… at least he should have.
But then, something shifted.
It was subtle at first. A cadence in Aldric’s voice, a tone not filled with excuses or hesitation but conviction.
Aldric was stepping forward—finally—into the space his father had waited so long for him to claim. The boy was always filled with self-doubt, but now there was steel in his voice. Not the brash, foolish kind. The tempered kind.
Inside, Lady Seraphine’s tone was critical, clipped, and cold.
“You have no idea what you’ve risked bringing them here, Aldric. Your brother is ill. Every exertion costs him.”
“He asked for this,” Aldric replied.
“That child does not know what’s good for him,” she snapped. “He barely speaks. He barely—”
“He speaks enough to make these,” Aldric said, pointing to the slates. “And to ask to be seen. That should matter.”
The room fell silent for a moment.
Then one of the builders—Mirelle, if Eldric remembered her name correctly—murmured under her breath, “She’s scarier than the bandits.”
Seraphine's gaze turned to ice in their direction, and all four froze like scolded children.
But Aldric held firm. Bit by bit, her frost cracked under the persistence.
With great reluctance, she leaned forward and examined the slates they had laid out, the scattered sketches, the tentative framework.
With each design explained, Seraphine’s expression softened—not from emotion, but from understanding. This was intelligent work. Precise. Purposeful. Necessary.
Then she asked the question that made Eldric’s gut clench.
“Who came up with this?”
Aldric hesitated.
“…Caelen.”
The room dropped into stillness, like breath held too long.
Seraphine stood straight. “Absolutely not.”
“But—”
“He is not to be asked for anything. Not while he lies there barely breathing on half the days he wakes. You all had no right to draw this from him.”
The air was taut. Even the freedfolk, who had been excited moments ago, fell into silence, chastised.
Eldric’s hand was on the doorknob, ready to break the moment—when the tap came.
All eyes turned.
Caelen, pale and small in his bedding, lifted his hand again—a second tap.
His mother looked at him, unreadable.
He stared at her—intense, fragile, determined.
“…Out,” Caelen said softly. “M’lady garden… big sister… flowers… sun. Out.”
It was broken, halting. But it was enough.
The weight of it hit them all at once.
He wanted more than a design.
He wanted life.
Lady Seraphine looked stunned, as if she didn’t know whether to cry or scold him.
And then the door creaked open, and Lord Eldric stepped in.
The air in the room shifted. Even Bran straightened like a soldier. Judgment had arrived in the shape of a weathered man with quiet authority and sharp eyes that missed nothing.
He walked to the center of the room, boots silent on the stone, and stood by the bed.
He looked at each face—one by one. And then he spoke.
“If he wants it, then fine.”
Relief was only half-formed when his voice deepened.
“But it is to be built only by these four,” he said, nodding toward the villagers. “It is to be used only by Caelen. And it will bear no name of Avalon or any noble house.”
He paused, letting it sink in.
“It will be a product of Spes Nova. Of New Hope.”
A breath passed through the room.
He turned.
“It is not to be discussed outside this manor. It is not to be shared or praised or made into a spectacle.”
Then his gaze swept the room.
“And I want a yes from each of you. This is not a command. This is an agreement.”
Seraphine’s jaw clenched, then she slowly nodded. “Yes.”
Mirelle raised her chin. “Yes.”
Petyr shrugged. “Fine by me.”
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Tamsen gave a firm, “Yes.”
Bran crossed his arms. “Yes. But we do it right.”
Aldric turned to Caelen. “Well?”
The boy blinked once. Then gave a tiny nod.
Lord Eldric’s eyes lingered on his youngest son, something unreadable in them.
Then he turned back to Aldric.
“And you,” he said. “You will not be part of this.”
“What?” Aldric asked, startled.
“You’ll be leaving with me,” his father continued. “At first light. We’re going to Isenford. There’s a caravan forming for the north run. I need a sharp eye. You’ll be mine.”
The silence that followed was heavy.
“But—”
“No arguments. You did well tonight,” he added, before Aldric could protest. “You showed your spine. Good, but you also broke the rules. Now it’s time to use that spine to pay your dues.”
He turned for the door.
Aldric looked at his brother, then at the group, then finally at his mother—who, for once, had no words.
“…Yes, Father,” he said at last.
“Good,” Lord Eldric said. “Because your coming of age is coming faster than you hoped. And you’re not a boy anymore.”
…
In the quiet aftermath of the late-night intrusion, the chamber of Lord and Lady Avalon was dimly lit, the fire on the hearth burning low. The children had been sent away; the freedfolk had gone to their hamlet after copying the slates to paper. There will be a supervised session tomorrow. Under her personal gaze. No more midnight schemes.
Seraphine sank into the high-backed chair near the fire, rubbing her temples.
Lord Eldric remained standing, arms crossed, as he watched the embers shift and flare.
For a long moment, neither spoke.
Finally, Seraphine exhaled and said bitterly, “How do we keep a secret that wants to announce itself to the world?”
Eldric gave a wry snort. “By locking every door and sealing every mouth, apparently.”
Seraphine cast him a look. “That hasn’t worked for twelve years.”
He didn’t argue.
She shook her head, voice low and tight. “They don’t understand. Not the children. Not Aldric, not Lisette, and certainly not Caelen. They can’t. They're only trying to help—but their help, in this case, is a torch waved in the dark. It draws all eyes.”
Eldric slowly lowered himself into the chair across from her.
“They’re brave,” he said. “Too brave.”
“And clever,” Seraphine added. “Which makes them dangerous. And we are outnumbered; we need Master Havlo even more now.”
Eldric nodded grimly.
The silence stretched again, thick with unspoken truths.
Finally, Seraphine reached for a folded paper from the side table—one of the copied slate designs. She unfolded it with care, smoothing it across her lap.
“It’s brilliant,” she murmured. “He’s brilliant. And if word spreads of a sick boy designing such a thing—”
“It will spread further than the valley,” Eldric finished. “They’ll come looking. First with questions. Then with chains.”
Seraphine’s fingers gripped the edge of the paper. “We can’t tell them everything. They’re too young, and even if we did, what would they do with it? They’d act. They’d rebel. They’d destroy the illusion we’ve been preserving.”
Eldric nodded again. “So we warn them—enough to slow them. Enough to keep them from setting the fire.”
She leaned forward. “Three options then.”
He raised an eyebrow. “Let’s hear them.”
“First,” Seraphine said, ticking off her fingers, “we tell them there's danger beyond the estate. That someone out there—bandits, lords, rebels—wants Caelen for what he is. A simple truth that doesn't require them to understand the why. It would keep them close, but... it feeds fear.”
Eldric made a face. “It also makes them more likely to act out.”
“Second,” she continued, “we say his illness is... unique. That pushing him could make it worse. They’re children. They care. That might temper them.”
“That might also lead to pity,” he said darkly. “And Caelen doesn’t want pity.”
“Third,” Seraphine sighed, “we claim there are oaths. Bound by blood. If certain things are revealed, we will suffer. It makes it our burden. Not his. Not theirs.”
Eldric was quiet. “That one… might hold the longest. Guilt binds tighter than fear.”
She looked into the fire, then slowly nodded her head. “Yes. But not forever.”
“No,” he agreed, “not forever.”
They sat in silence again. Wind brushed against the windowpanes like a whisper of fate.
Finally, Seraphine turned to him. “He will outgrow the silence, Eldric. Already he’s reaching. Designing. Commanding. And once he sees a world bigger than these walls, once he understands his mind is worth more than the name Avalon—”
“He’ll walk right into the storm,” Eldric finished.
Seraphine’s voice dropped. “We have to tell him. The whole truth. Before he decides something we can’t hide.”
Eldric looked toward the window. Past it, the manor was still and quiet. But he knew somewhere in the east wing, a boy lay awake. Not just thinking.
Planning.
He turned back to his wife, his voice low and resolute.
“Then we do it soon. Before our son blazes like the Beaconfire he is… and we lose the chance to keep him from becoming the bonfire of the world.”
Seraphine didn’t respond.
Her fingers gripped the fabric of her gown, knuckles pale. Her gaze was still on the fire, but not really. It was distant, locked on a place only mothers could see: a path ahead filled with pain she couldn’t yet prevent.
Eldric reached across the space between them and gently took her hand.
That was when he saw it—the shine in her eyes, the soft swell of tears unfallen.
“No mother,” she whispered hoarsely, “wants to be the one to teach her child the word danger.”
Eldric squeezed her hand. “And no father wants to be the one to teach him why it matters.”
She looked at him then, and for a moment, they weren’t defined as lord and lady, noble and strong. They were just two parents staring down the fire they could no longer outrun.
“We’ll do it together,” he said.
She nodded, eyes glistening. “Together.”
…
In his room, Caelen lay still beneath his covers, though sleep would not come. The candles had guttered into wax puddles. Shadows crept along the walls like memories trying to find their way home.
Slowly, he reached beneath his collar, fingers brushing the leather cord he never removed. He pulled free the pouch and tipped the white stone into his hand.
It shimmered faintly at first, then bloomed with soft, pulsing light. It wasn't the fire of candles or the glow of lanterns—it was something older. Purer. It pushed back the dark gently, like dawn nudging open the edge of the world.
The room changed under its glow. His slates gleamed with half-finished sketches, symbols etched in restless chalk. The blanket pooled around him like snowdrifts, his hands pale and still atop it.
He turned the stone in his palm and let his thoughts replay the night. Aldric's nervous courage. The strangers’ awe. The firm, cold voice of his mother. The decision was passed like a sentence by his father.
But something had been off.
They were angry, yes. Protective, certainly. But beneath that, beneath their words and warnings, was something else.
They weren’t afraid for him.
They were afraid of something else.
Caelen couldn’t say what. Not yet. But he could feel it—a tension that wrapped every moment tight, a thread running just below the skin of every look, every touch.
He stared at the stone.
Then, a whisper of a memory rose unbidden.
His mother’s voice, reading from the same book every morning, sunlight on her dress, the scent of a flower in the air.
He heard her voice read out the words. He did not understand all the words, but it seemed important:
“Beneath the veil of silver tongues and gold-laced crowns,
Lurks danger cloaked in smiles, where silent power drowns—
For hands that reach with hunger, not with grace or creed,
Turn kingdoms into kindling for the fire born of greed. “
He hadn't understood the words then. Not fully. Not even now, but they lodged in his chest like an ember waiting for a breath.
He nodded to himself, understanding that he must learn the meaning of these words, and gave a slight nod. Slow. Certain.
And in the corners of the room, where the light just barely touched, his two shadows in the white light nodded in agreement.

