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Chapter 14: Nice try

  The Second Gate was the filter that separated the brutes from the cultivators.

  A row of stone tables held spheres of Heavy Spirit Iron, resting in deep grooves. The candidates lined up, faces pale with concentration.

  "Next!"

  A burly boy with broad shoulders stepped up. He grunted, channeling Fire Qi. The ball shot up violently, smashing into the top wire of the maze. CLANG. He panicked, dragging it along the metal rail, sparks flying.

  "Fail! No control," the deacon shouted.

  A girl followed. She sweated and strained, but her Qi was too thin. The ball wobbled in the groove but refused to rise.

  "Fail! Insufficient Foundation."

  Then came Wang Hu.

  He cracked his knuckles and channeled his High-Grade Earth Qi.

  "Up!" he grunted.

  The ball rose, but it was heavy even for him. He frowned, forcing more power into it. It hovered unsteadily. He pushed it through the maze, but he lacked finesse. The ball banged against the corners—thud, thud—before dropping into the bucket.

  "Strength: Good. Control: Average," the deacon noted. "Pass."

  Wang Hu wiped his hands, looking satisfied. "Power is what matters," he scoffed.

  Chen Rou stepped up.

  She took a deep breath. Her Peak-Grade Water Qi surged.

  Whoosh.

  The ball didn't just rise; it launched. It hit the top of the limit-cage with a loud rang. Rou flinched.

  "Gently!" the deacon warned.

  "I'm trying!" Rou bit her lip. Her Qi was like a firehose; throttling it down was hard. She guided the ball through the maze, but it drifted like a boat in a storm, scraping the sides constantly.

  "Strength: Excellent. Control: Poor," the deacon sighed. "Pass."

  Finally, Mingzhi stepped up.

  On the balcony, Wang Long leaned over and tapped the stone railing three times. Beside him, Elder Zhang’s eyes glinted maliciously. He made a subtle hand sign, his Qi flaring invisibly toward the stage.

  Mingzhi placed his hand over the sphere.

  "Pay attention," the Spirit’s voice spiked. "Localized Gravity Array activated beneath the table. The gravitational constant has just increased. The object now weighs approximately six hundred pounds."

  Mingzhi’s eyes narrowed. Sabotage.

  He tried to apply standard force. The ball didn't budge. It felt welded to the table.

  He gritted his teeth. If he used the full power of his Perfect Seed, he could lift it with a bit of effort—but that would expose him. He had to lift a mountain while looking like he was lifting a stone.

  “Physics,” Mingzhi thought, sweat beading on his forehead. “I can't fight the gravity directly with this much output. I need to change the friction coefficient.”

  He vibrated his Earth Qi at a resonant frequency, disrupting the gravity array’s anchor and reducing the effective contact force.

  "Look at him," someone in the crowd laughed. "He's turning red! He can't even lift it!"

  "Trash physique, trash strength."

  Mingzhi’s knees buckled slightly. Veins popped on his neck.

  Rise!

  Slowly, agonizingly, the ball hovered. One inch. Two inches.

  It was shaky, looking like he was at his absolute limit. Elder Zhang smirked on the balcony, pleased by the humiliating display.

  But once the ball was airborne, the game changed.

  Mingzhi’s struggle vanished from his hands. His body was shaking, but his mind was locked in.

  He moved his finger.

  The ball followed instantly.

  It glided through the wire maze with the eerie smoothness of a ghost. It navigated the sharp turns without a single wobble. It passed through the narrowest choke-point without grazing the wire.

  Absolute control.

  He dropped it into the bucket. Clang.

  The laughter in the crowd died down, replaced by confused murmurs.

  "He nearly passed out lifting it, but... he didn't touch the sides once?"

  "Weird technique."

  On the balcony, Qingyu’s eyes narrowed. She wasn't looking at Mingzhi’s shaky legs. She was looking at the stone table legs. They had sunk half an inch into the dust—something none of the other tables had done.

  The weight was different, she realized, her gaze flickering to Elder Zhang’s smug face. Sabotage.

  She looked back at Mingzhi, who was wiping sweat from his face, looking exhausted but unbeaten.

  He overcame it, she thought, a spark of respect igniting in her chest. He didn't complain. He just calculated and executed.

  "Pass," the deacon grunted, marking the scroll. "Though your strength is... concerningly low."

  Mingzhi walked away, his legs feeling like jelly, but his expression hard. Two gates down. One to go.

  The Third Gate: Understanding

  The line moved slowly. The atmosphere was tense. This wasn't about strength; it was about memory.

  The final station was a row of desks where elderly scribes sat with scrolls, asking questions to test the disciples' theoretical knowledge.

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  "Candidate Liu," a scribe asked a nervous girl. "What is the primary effect of Spirit-Whisper Grass?"

  "It... uh... calms the Heart Demon?"

  "Correct. Pass."

  "Candidate Zhao," another scribe asked. "How many major meridians are utilized in the basic Cloud Gathering circulation?"

  "Twelve standard, plus the Ren and Du vessels!"

  "Acceptable. Pass."

  "Next! Wang Hu!"

  Wang Hu swaggered up to the desk, though his confidence wavered slightly when he saw the scribe’s stern face.

  "Candidate Wang," the scribe intoned, not looking up. "Recite the Generating Cycle of the Five Elements."

  It was a basic question. Any child in a cultivation clan should know it.

  Wang Hu blinked. He scratched his head. "Uhh... Wood makes Fire. Fire makes... ash? No, Earth. Earth makes... uh..."

  He froze. He looked around nervously. "Metal?"

  "And what does Metal generate?" the scribe pressed, his quill hovering over the 'Fail' box.

  Wang Hu started to sweat. "Metal makes... swords?"

  The scribe sighed, dipping his pen in red ink to fail him. But before he could write, he felt a gaze burning into the back of his neck. He glanced up toward the balcony.

  Elder Zhang was staring directly at him, his face stone-cold. He gave a microscopic nod.

  The scribe’s hand trembled. He adjusted his grip on the quill.

  "Metal melts into liquid, representing Water," the scribe muttered quickly, as if correcting a student. "Close enough. Your understanding is... rough, but passable."

  "Pass," the scribe announced loudly.

  Wang Hu let out a breath, smirking at the other candidates as he walked away. "Too easy."

  "Next! Chen Rou!"

  Rou stepped up. She was confident. She had mastered the Moon-Tide Scripture and had a Peak-Grade constitution.

  "Candidate Chen," the scribe asked, pulling a different scroll. "You possess a Water Constitution. Tell me: If a cultivator is struck by the Scarlet Fire Poison, which causes the blood to boil, what is the specific low-grade herbal counter-agent?"

  Rou froze.

  Her face went pale. She knew how to cycle Qi. She knew how to form a Seed. But she had never studied the vast encyclopedia of Spirit Herbs.

  "I..." She stammered. "Use... Water Qi to cool it?"

  "Incorrect," the scribe said flatly. "Water Qi will cause the poison to condense and clot the heart. You need the herb."

  Rou’s hands clenched in her skirt. She didn't know. Panic began to set in.

  Standing behind her in the line, Mingzhi kept his face blank. He shifted his weight.

  Tap. Tap-tap. Tap.

  He drummed the toe of his boot against the stone floor in a rhythmic code. The vibration traveled through the stone and into Rou’s feet, a faint rhythmic pulse she recognized instantly.

  Frost... Leaf... Root...

  Rou’s eyes widened. She recognized the rhythm.

  "Frost-Leaf Root!" she blurted out.

  The scribe paused. He looked at her suspiciously, then nodded.

  "Correct. The Frost-Leaf Root freezes the toxin, allowing it to be excreted. Pass."

  Rou sagged with relief, shooting a quick, grateful glance over her shoulder at Mingzhi before hurrying to the success area.

  "Next! Xie Mingzhi!"

  Mingzhi stepped forward.

  The scribe opened his mouth to ask a question, but a shadow fell over the table.

  Elder Zhang descended from the balcony, sweeping the scribe aside. He took the seat, his eyes cold.

  "I will test this one," Zhang announced. "His physical aptitude is trash. His strength is barely sufficient. Let us see if he understands the Grand Dao, or if he is simply wasting our air."

  He leaned back, steepled his fingers, and smiled cruelly.

  "Tell me, boy. We cultivate the Body as a Tree. We cultivate the Soul as a Weapon. According to the 'Law of the Four Pillars', why is it forbidden to ignite the Soul Furnace before the Body has reached the end of Fruit Formation stage?"

  The crowd went silent. Even the older deacons looked uncomfortable.

  This was a question about the transition between the First Pillar (Body) and the Second Pillar (Soul)—knowledge reserved for Elders or those ascending to the Upper Realm. An Outer Disciple shouldn't even know what a "Soul Furnace" is.

  Mingzhi didn't panic. He closed his eyes for a heartbeat.

  “Hmph. That doctrine is older than this mountain,” the Spirit said coolly. “Listen carefully. The so-called Law of the Four Pillars was challenged once… and nearly erased for it.”

  Mingzhi opened his eyes and spoke clearly.

  "Because the Mortal Body acts as the Furnace to forge the Soul," Mingzhi recited. "If the 'Tree' has not yet borne Fruit, the trunk is too green. Igniting the Soul Fire early would burn the meridian wood to ash, destroying the vessel."

  Elder Zhang’s smile widened slightly—he was ready to dismiss it as a textbook answer.

  But Mingzhi continued.

  "However... the 'Mad Sage of the Western Desert' proved this theory incomplete. He successfully ignited the Furnace during the early Fruit Formation stage by using the 'Cold-Iron Meridian' technique to insulate the vessel, allowing for dual cultivation of Body and Soul."

  Elder Zhang’s smile vanished instantly.

  He scowled. The boy hadn't just answered the impossible question; he had cited the obscure exception that disproved the rule.

  "Clever tongue," Zhang scoffed, hiding his shock. "But memorizing ancient exceptions is not true understanding."

  He slammed his hand on the table. "I have seen enough. Constitution: Waste. Strength: Weak. Understanding: Superficial. You are rejected."

  "Rejected?" Mingzhi stepped forward, his voice hard. "I passed every metric. The stone lit up. The ball entered the bucket. The answer was correct."

  "I am the Presiding Elder!" Zhang roared, standing up. His Aura flared, a heavy pressure that forced Mingzhi to brace his feet to stay standing. "My judgment is final! The Azure Cloud Sect does not collect garbage!"

  "Wait."

  The voice was not loud, but it cut through the Elder’s shouting like a razor blade.

  Lin Qingyu stood at the edge of the balcony. She looked down, her face impassive, her red robes fluttering in the wind.

  "Elder Zhang," she said coolly. "You claim he lacks understanding? I would like to verify that."

  "Young Sect Master," Zhang said, trying to mask his irritation with a bow. "This is a waste of time. The boy is clearly—"

  "Candidate Xie," Qingyu interrupted, ignoring the Elder completely. She looked directly at Mingzhi.

  "You practice Earth. Answer me this: If a cultivator possesses a High-Grade Fire Seed, and the extreme volatility causes instability during the Sprouting Phase, risking a dantian collapse... what is the only theoretical solution to stabilize it?"

  The Elders on the platform froze. They stared at the Young Sect Master in shock. They knew this problem—it was the specific flaw of the Lin Family’s cultivation method. It was considered an unsolved paradox.

  Mingzhi met her eyes. He saw the challenge. Prove it, she was saying. Prove you are the one who wrote those notes.

  "Standard cooling methods fail because they reduce density," Mingzhi answered, his voice ringing out across the silent plaza. "The only solution is to use the Laminar Layering Technique. One must fuse the excess thermal energy back into the Seed, adding density rings layer by layer. You do not cool the fire; you pressurize it until the volatility becomes structure."

  Elder Zhang blinked. He laughed incredulously. "Layering? That is ancient nonsense! A myth! It would crush the seed!"

  "It does not," Qingyu said coldly.

  She stepped forward, gripping the railing. "I used that 'myth' to Sprout my own Seed last year. It saved my foundation."

  She turned her gaze to Elder Zhang. "This candidate possesses insight that exceeds our own Archives. If you reject him for 'lack of understanding', Elder... are you implying that my own cultivation is flawed?"

  Elder Zhang went pale. He opened his mouth, but no sound came out. He had been checkmated. To fail the boy now was to publicly insult the Young Sect Master.

  He glared at Mingzhi with pure, venomous hatred.

  "Fine," Zhang spat. "He passes."

  He flicked his sleeve, sitting back down with a huff. "But I will not have such a trash constitution in the main dorms. It would insult the talent of others. Assign him to the Waste Sector. Let him rot with the refuse, the failed experiments, and the abandoned arrays no one bothers to dismantle."

  A ripple of pity went through the crowd. The Waste Sector was a graveyard for ambitions.

  But Mingzhi didn't look upset. A flicker of satisfaction crossed his eyes. No neighbors. No oversight. Perfect.

  He turned his body toward the balcony. Toward the girl in red.

  He bowed deep—a proper, respectful disciple's bow.

  "Thank you, Elder," Mingzhi said loudly to Zhang, but his eyes were fixed on Qingyu as he rose. "I will not disappoint the Sect."

  Qingyu didn't nod. She didn't wave. But for a fleeting second, the corner of her mouth quirked upward in a faint, almost invisible smile.

  Welcome to the war, Mingzhi.

  She turned and sat back on her throne, her face returning to stone.

  Sunset turned the mist to blood-orange. The selection was over.

  Mingzhi grabbed his grey Outer Disciple robes. He found Rou in the crowd; she was beaming at him, though she looked worried about his assignment.

  "The Waste Sector..." she whispered. "Ming'er, that's terrible."

  "It's quiet," Mingzhi said with a faint smile, adjusting his pack. "I like quiet. You go to the main dorms. Make friends. Get strong."

  "We made it," she said, tears in her eyes.

  "We're in," Mingzhi agreed.

  He turned and walked toward the western edge of the sect, where the dilapidated huts of the Waste Sector lay in the deep shadow of the mountain. The path was overgrown, and the air smelled of sulfur and rust.

  To others, it looked like a prison. To Xie Mingzhi, it looked like a workshop.

  He stepped into the shadows. The real cultivation began now.

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