This chapter is for leaving feedback on Book 1 as a whole. Were there any scenes or interactions that jarred you while reading, that you think needs improving or reworking? Were there any plot holes or unexplained elements you think deserves expanding upon? Leave any important feedback you want! No promises that it will be addressed, naturally, but I'll for sure read through and see if I agree :)

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