The air hit him like diesel and salt. The bus door swung open, and the world outside was all noise, dust and, of course, men already screaming. Tyson didn’t even have his feet on the pavement before the first sergeant’s voice ripped through the aisle.

  “Get the fuck off my bus and form up on my yellow footprints!” Seats rattled, the man’s grip leaving deep impressions in the vinyl.

  Boots hit pavement like dominoes. Forty recruits tripped and stumbled into lines under the glare of the California sun, breath smoking in the December air. The asphalt glistened with oil and spit. Tyson’s hands shook, not from fear, but from the speed of everything. They’d been quiet for hours, half asleep on the ride, and now their ears were full of thunder.

  Drill instructors moved through them like a pack of wolves, feasting on weakness and tears. Campaign covers shadowed their faces; only mouths were visible, all teeth and hate. “Eyes front! Mouth shut! When I say move, you fucking move!” Their heads swiveled like turrets, seeking new targets. “You eyeballing me, motherfucker?! You got something you want to say to me!?” He was in a recruit’s face, hands locked in a knife shape, jabbing him in the chest.

  Two more drill instructors emerged from the crowd. “I know he asked you a question!” One of them interjected.

  “No sir!” The recruit yelled faintly through the guttural growls and snarls of his assailants.

  “Open your disgusting mouth! Scream it!” The second instructor’s voice resonated in a low, raspy frog-voice that projected through the grinder.

  Tyson was stuck, glued to his yellow footprints as he awaited his turn. Which drill instructor would get a whiff of him and want a bite? His eyes darted; madness unfolding before him, a cacophony of anguish washed into his mind. He tried to drown it out, looking for any melody possible.

  Eye contact. Beneath an olive drab visor, Tyson had committed his first cardinal sin.

  “What the fuck is your ugly ass looking at?!” The man approached with intensity. “Did I tell you to fucking look at me?!”

  He’d seen how this played out for the other gentleman, “No, sir,” erupted from low in his gut, eyes locked forward.

  “So, I look like I sit behind a fucking desk all day?! Look at my fucking rank!”

  Tyson’s eyes stayed trained. Looking at the rank would do him no good; he hadn’t been taught yet. His jaw clenched.

  “Oh, so you think you’re fucking tough?!”

  “No, sir— Drill Instructor!”

  “Then why the fuck are you in Marine Corps boot camp!? We only want tough motherfucker, bitch!” The man’s eyes screamed, his eyebrows were hidden by the campaign cover, but every ounce of him trembled in anger.

  Tyson was stumped. Why was he in Marine Corps boot camp? Some part of him had to have felt he was tough, at least tough enough for all of this. Was he here by choice? The past few days had flown by so fast, just one big haze. “I—I don’t know—“

  “‘I?’ ‘I!?’ You don’t get to fucking say that word anymore. The only ‘I — I’ I want to hear is ‘Aye Aye, Sergeant’, that understood?! Now, since you ‘don’t know’ why you’re here, I’m gonna help you find some fucking answers! Run to the left, right now!”

  Tyson moved, his feet carrying him to the left.

  “OK, now come back, right now!”

  On a swift pivot, Tyson was back on the yellow footprints, face to face with the Marine.

  “OK, on your face, right now!”

  Tyson ducked down, sluggishly going to a knee, looking up at the instructor.

  “There go those fucking eyes again. Did I say ‘look at me’?” He palmed Tyson’s head into the pavement, “I said ‘on your fucking face!’”

  He laid there until he was instructed otherwise.

  “OK, on your feet, right now!”

  Tyson climbed to his feet, scurrying rapidly to regain his balance.

  “OK, when I tell you to, get your shit and go through those doors. Do it, now. Move!”

  He didn’t remember walking to the building, only flashes: white paint-chipped walls, linoleum floors, the sound of clippers chewing through hair, someone vomiting in the hallway.

  “You disgusting, worthless child! What are we supposed to do with you?! You want your momma now!? I ought to make you eat it, you pig!” The instructor stood over the recruit, doubled over, yelling in his ear.

  At some point, Tyson was standing naked in front of a metal table, holding a stack of uniforms that smelled like mothballs and bleach. A frog-voice yelled, “Change! You’ve got thirty seconds to look like Marines!” Less than thirty seconds later, he was wearing another set of clothes.

  Then came the call room. Rows of pay phones, cords tangled like vines. One by one, recruits stepped forward. “Read from the card in the booth, call your folks, let them hear their darling child one last time before you become a fucking man.”

  When his turn came, Tyson lifted the receiver, pressed the buttons, and let it ring into silence. No voice on the other end. No one to read the lie to. Just the sound of static and a dial tone that felt truer than anything he could have said. “This is Recruit Graves. I have arrived safely at MCRD San Diego. Please do not send food or bulky items.” The drill instructor watched, timing each call with a stopwatch.

  “Move, recruit!” The DI snatched the phone from his hand and shoved him forward. He never looked back.

  They lined them up again—bare heads, wide eyes—and handed each a slip of paper. “Fill out your next of kin and emergency contact. Write neat. Don’t fuck it up. If you fucking idiots end up getting yourselves killed while you’re here, this is how we’ll find your folks to deliver your weak little bodies to.”

  Tyson stared at the form, pen trembling.

  Name: Graves, Tyson R.

  Next of Kin: Mr. Graves, X.

  Contact Number: 213-555-7314.

  Address: 6694 Somewhere Ave, Faraway Ca, 91432.

  He wrote the lies cleanly, without hesitation. He wasn’t about to give these people his mother’s name. Not after what she’d said last week—the shouting, the disgust, the way she called Black soldiers traitors in burnt skin. He’d left that at the burger joint, with his bike.

  #

  They didn’t sleep that first night. Or the two that followed. They ran, they stood, they filled out more forms. The men were issued additional uniforms and gear: seabags and rucksacks, spare fatigues and boots, but no running shoes. “We’re running a little short,” the supply corporal told them, “more will be here after you ‘pick up’.”

  The men learned to roll skivvy-rolls and fold T-shirts into perfect 6x6 rectangles, to eat in thirty seconds flat, to stop thinking about itching, blinking, and coughing. The receiving-week drill instructors were ghosts from other companies: faces without names, appearing in doorways to shout contradictions.

  By the fourth night, Tyson couldn’t remember what day it was. Every surface smelled like Lysol and fear. Recruits whispered prayers into their pillowcases, only to be caught and smoked for it. He learned fast: silence was survival.

  By day six, they were half-dead. The morning began the same: yelling, chow, running—but instead of PT, they were marched into a low building that smelled like paper and bulldog aftershave. The windows were covered. Inside were folding chairs, a table, and a single light that hummed.

  They waited for hours. One by one, names were called, recruits whispering amongst themselves.

  “What is going on, man?”

  “I don’t know, it’s so cold in here, though.”

  “That’s the point, your recruiters didn’t tell you?” The men leaned in, only to straighten up as the door swung open.

  “Graves, Tyson.”

  He stood, legs trembling, and walked through a narrow hallway into a smaller room. Three men in green sat behind a metal desk. No name tags. The air was heavy with cigarette smoke.

  “Sit,” the one in the middle said. His voice was calm—too calm.

  Tyson sat.

  “Do you know what ‘fraudulent enlistment means, Graves?” The Marine on the right sat back in his chair. His eyes were low, on the paperwork on the desk. “UCMJ Article 83. That’s the Uniform Code of Military Justice. It occurs when someone knowingly provides false information or conceals disqualifying facts to join the military.”

  Tyson’s mind raced, swallowing hard. What were they talking about?

  There was a throat clear from the gentleman on the left, “You were given clear orders, were you not? Do you have some sort of learning disability, boy? And hearing problem, maybe?”

  Tyson’s eyes bucked, “Well, no, I —“

  “‘This recruit’. That’s another thing you’ve been fucking told. You refer to yourself as ‘This recruit’”. The middle man leaned in, agitated.

  “This recruit doesn’t have any learning disability—“

  “So then, explain what happened. You didn’t call home,” the man said, flipping a file open. “You also left half your paperwork blank. You write real neat for someone who can’t spell his mama’s name.”

  Tyson swallowed again. “Well, this recruit was homeless before coming here, and—“ he searched for answers to the obvious, “Didn’t have anyone to call, sir.”

  “Sir?” The man’s smile widened. “Do we look like a fucking officers? Say it right.”

  “No, Drill Instructor.”

  A fist slammed the table hard, the drill instructor on the right now leaned in. “That’s a fucking lie, and you know it! Courage, honor, commitment; do these mean nothing to you? Is all of this a fucking joke to you?”

  The question caught Tyson off guard. “No, Drill Instructor.”

  “Good.” The middle DI leaned forward, tapping the paper. “Your recruiter told us a different story. He said your folks are… what did he call it? Community organizers.” He smirked at the others. “That means what I think it means, Sergeant?”

  The one on the left, his tone was lighter than the others, grunted. “Means Panther trash.”The room went silent except for the hum of the light.

  “Why’d you lie, Graves?” the centered DI asked again, his voice level. “Make it a good one, your career hangs in the balance. You probably have never been in a situation where your entire life teetered on one moment.” He paused, studying Tyson. “You embarrassed?”

  Tyson stared at the floor. “Didn’t think it mattered, Drill Instructor.” He didn’t think it mattered. He knew it mattered, he knew who it mattered to, and to call them and tell them the truth: that their baby willingly sided with the enemy, would destroy them. Like it destroyed him. ‘You can change your mind, until you can’t. Tyson picked his head up and faced the instructors.

  “It matters when enemies threaten to tear this country, the way we live, all of our creature comforts, into tiny little shreds to shit on. True disruption comes from the inside. It matters when radicals raise a person who wakes up one day and says ‘I wanna be a Marine’.” He leaned closer, his voice dropping low. “You trying to convince me you’re here to wipe the slate clean? You think coming here is enough to fix that bloodline? You think we can wash it clean?”

  Tyson didn’t answer. His throat was tight, but he didn’t look away.

  There was a laugh from the man on the left. “Bet they told you we got what we deserved in ‘Nam.” He leaned back.

  Tyson’s jaw locked. “They said a lot of things.”

  “Yeah? And just what’d you say back?”

  He didn’t want to remember. The shouting, the words about honor, duty, and how this wasn’t his father’s war. “I told them they were wrong.” He wanted to look away, but he couldn’t show weakness, not now. “I told them ‘there was more worth fighting for than just their cause’. That there is a whole society around us that requires order, that someone would love to trade places with us, while we sit in our castles.” The night swam back to him. His parents called him a fascist, an elitist. They said he knew nothing of the world, questioning when he’d get back into school for a proper education. His mouth opened to speak, but a hand stayed his tongue.

  In the shadow, the man on the left leaned back, chuckling. “That’s why you’re here? To prove them wrong?”

  The DI in the center drummed his fingers once, then snapped the file shut. “Fine. You’ll get your chance. You lie again, we’ll find out. Everyone lies, Graves. We just make you tell the truth first.”

  He stood. “Get the fuck out.”

  Tyson rose, his legs shaking. Before he reached the door, the DI’s voice followed him.

  “Graves, one more thing.”

  He turned.

  “Welcome to the Marine Corps.”

  #

  He didn’t sleep that night either. None of them did. Though this was the first evening they weren’t interrupted throughout the night with ‘games’, as the DI’s called it, the squad bay was alive with energy. Sleep deprivation didn’t overcome anxiety; the men each expressed their fears and hesitations, their expectations and delusions of grandeur on the periphery. Tyson held his opinion.

  By the seventh morning, he’d stopped hearing words, only rhythm. Feet on the floor. Orders like percussion. The recruits had been told to pack their gear and prepare to move. The receiving barracks were located in the center of the recruit depot, meaning the men needed to march with all their equipment down the ‘recruit highway’ which ran the length of the training area. It was an awkward sight, many of the recruits sandwiching themselves between two seabags full of gear.

  “Upstairs, second floor on the left. When I tell you to, I want you to line up, in alphabetical order, before filling in upstairs. Once you get up there, take the first rack and fill in, start on the left side of the squad bay, and fill around from the rear, then stand at the foot of your rack and await next orders. Ready? Move.”

  The recruits shouted out last names, aligning themselves appropriately, then filed off upstairs, claiming each rack as instructed before standing ‘online’, at the foot of their racks, silent and at attention. The men waited for the instructor who marched them to come upstairs after them, but he didn’t.

  The squad bay was a long, rectangular chamber of concrete, steel, and fluorescent scrutiny. Metal bunk racks lined both sides of the bay, each housing two recruits—one up, one down—with two footlockers squared precisely at the foot of each rack, one per man. These lockers weren’t just storage; they were boundary markers, ritual objects in a space governed by geometry and control. A strip of tape ran along the edge of each locker, marking where a recruit’s heels would land when ordered to “stand online”—a posture of readiness, silence, and exposure.

  Overhead, the lights buzzed with institutional indifference, casting hard shadows across the polished floor. At one end of the bay sat the heads: communal, unpartitioned, and brutally efficient. Toilets, sinks, and showers offered no privacy, only the reminder that the individual had been absorbed into the unit. Near the entrance loomed the duty hut; a windowed enclosure where drill instructors could observe without entering, speak without stepping forward. It was the eye of the storm, the place from which command radiated. Even when empty, the space felt watched. Even in stillness, it pulsed with authority.

  Slowly, the door to the duty hut crept open, the recruits fighting the urge to look. A tall, muscular, bald man stepped out, facing the platoon. He had piercing blue eyes. “Good, you found ‘the line.’ As a ‘department of the Navy,’ we use ‘Nautical talk.’ This here, where I am standing, is the ‘quarter deck.’ He pointed to his left, “You recruits are on my port side.” Then to his right, “Y’all are my starboard.” His arms motioned to the windows lining the walls. “Those are portholes,” he pointed to the doors, “front hatch, rear hatch.” His hands were now on his hips. “A ‘school-circle’ is when I want you to come sit around me, wherever I am, be that in the squad bay or in the field. The order is ‘school-circle, on me, do it, now. Move’. That was just the explanation. You got that?” His voice was calm, almost soothing.

  “Yes, Drill Instructor!” The platoon acknowledged.

  “Now, one more thing. When we are here, in the squad bay, unless I tell you otherwise, school circle does not require acknowledgment. Just do it.”

  “Aye, aye, Staff Sergeant!”

  “School circle, on me. Do it now….”

  The recruits took a breath in anticipation.

  “Move.”

  The recruits formed a semicircle on the cold deck around the duty hut. Sunlight came through the high windows in narrow beams.

  “My name is Staff Sergeant Harris. I am your Senior Drill Instructor. I’m from Houston, Texas. I’ve been in the Marines for 15 years. I did three tours to Vietnam.” He paced around the semi-circle, hands still on his belt. “I’ve been a drill instructor for 5 years now, and I’m hoping to transition into Drill Master here on the depot soon.” He motioned for the door, opening it again as two more Marines emerged, marching in precision, then snapping to attention, then parade rest. “These are Sergeant Cervantes and Staff Sergeant Barientes. We are your Drill Instructors.”

  He paused, scanning their faces, still no shouting, just authority that filled the air like dry heat. “Today, you sit before us, mere boys. Children blind to the realities of the world. And that’s how we will treat you. From here forward, you will do as we say, how we say it. You will move when we tell you to, and for however long we desire it. You are nothing until we tell you you’re something. You will fail until we tell you you’re no longer failures. You will not die, though you’ll wish you could. And when it’s over, you’ll be Marines.”

  Staff Sgt Harris snapped to parade rest, then to attention. “Now you know who we are. This is me, and my Drill Instructors. Here is my promise to you: You came here as civilians. You will leave here as Marines. You will hate me. You will curse me. But one day, you will thank me for what I made you become. I will train you, test you, and break you down. I will build you back stronger than you ever imagined you could be. I will never ask you to do anything I will not do myself. I will never give up on you — even when you give up on yourself.

  He turned to his right. The other two stepped forward. Together, in perfect unison, they raised their right hands and recited:

  “These recruits are entrusted to my care. I will train them to the best of my ability. I will develop them into smartly disciplined, physically fit, basically trained Marines, thoroughly indoctrinated in love of Corps and country. I will demand of them, and demonstrate by my own example, the highest standards of personal conduct, morality, and professional skill.”

  Then Harris lowered his hand and looked at them all.

  “Now, y’all stand, and swear your own promise to me and my drill instructors. You’ll repeat after me.”

  He led them through the oath, voice like thunder wrapped in calm:

  “This we swear: that we will give everything, every drop, every breath, to become United States Marines.”

  The last word hung in the air.

  The two junior drill instructors snapped to attention, nodding. Cervantes turned to Barientes, now screaming in that raspy, hallow frog voice, “On your feet, you fucking animals!” and the storm, which the recruits seemed to have been in the eye of, ensued once more.

  #

  Instant, willingness, obedience to orders; that’s what they called it. It’s what was demanded. No delay, beyond compliant vessels answering and responding with no hesitation. Mindless. Jarheads. To obtain it, the recruits were subjected to the ‘reforming’ process, as if the men had been poured into a mold. The mold was a long rectangle of steel racks and fluorescent light, and every day they tightened the screws. Shirts folded sharper. Brass shined harder. Covers sat lower. As a unit, the platoon learned where their heels stopped on the tape, where their eyes belonged, how to breathe without being heard. They grew to hate ‘Jody’, reminded time and time again that he was back home, ‘fucking their girl’, ‘driving their car’. Tyson felt his own edges refining, sanding down: less swing in his gait, less drifting melody under his breath. He still drummed a rhythm on his thigh when no one was looking, a ghost of a keyboard line that kept time with the shouting.

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  The recruits were taken by the armory and issued rifles before ‘go-fasters’. Running shoes didn’t show up the first week. Again, the recruits were promised ‘next week’.

  “It’s a company-wide issue. Until it’s resolved, whatever you wore off the bus is what hits the grinder...”

  Tyson had shown up in beat-up black Converse hi-tops; flat, stingy, unforgiving. That first morning run, back in receiving, flared up through his arches, his ankles burning like fire.

  Granados, first name Alex, clapped his shoulder as they jogged, mouth a thin line, eyes laughing anyway. He had the same shoes. “Good choices, cabrón,” he muttered between breaths.

  They weren’t rack-mates, not quite yet. Not until the move into the permanent squad bay, when alphabetical order chained Granados, Graves to one on the port side, 5 sets of racks in. Tyson took the bottom bunk. Granados, top. Two footlockers squared, tape aligned. They realized on the second night, taking off those cursed Converse in sync, that they’d sat next to each other on the bus.

  “Maybe it’s destiny,” Alex whispered, tightening up corners on his side of the rack.

  “Or punishment.” Tyson snorted and hid the smile.

  MCRD San Diego never slept. At any time, one could hear shouting. Whether that be individuals or groups; in the ‘bays’, on the ‘highway’, chow hall, medical, dental. Even when the recruits were in the ‘classroom’, the first month loaded with history lessons of hardened warriors, epic battles, and the ethos and ‘esprit de corps’ that bound them together. Through history, the men learned who their enemies were.

  “Enemies of democracy! Wielders of tyranny threaten to destroy all you hold dear.....!“

  In the Bravo Company’s classroom, every platoon gathered to be educated on places, people, equipment, and years; on proper recollection of the narratives. Starting with their ‘birth’, Tun Tavern, Philadelphia, November 10, 1775. From the Battle against King Montezuma, which earned NCOs and Officers the ‘blood stripe’ on their dress blues trousers, to the Barbary wars of Tripoli, where Marine officers earned the Mameluke Sword. They learned how Marines earned the nickname ‘Devil Dogs’ in Belleau Wood, France, from the Germans, and about the island-hopping campaigns of World War II against the Japanese.A lot of ‘Who was where’, ‘who shot who’, ‘when’, ‘why’, ‘how’.

  “Marine pilot Logan Walsh was shot down during the escort mission from Iwo Jima to Tokyo on Directing Japanese fighters off the trail, he was never recovered… ” “…Grand ‘Old Man’ of the Marine Corps? Archibald Henderson…” “….First woman Marine? Opha Mae Johnson... 1918…” They learned the date ‘by the numbers’, as it was referred.

  If a recruit finished early, gear staged, corners tight, knowledge checked, he got turned into a signpost. Tyson started seeing them everywhere in the first month: silent statues at intersections of chaos. “Head’s that way, recruit.” “Chow hall this hatch, recruit.” “Form two lines, recruits.” Always ‘recruits’, blank faces, eyes like dead bulbs, pointing fingers as the tide of bodies broke around them. He envied the stillness for half a breath, then watched those same statues get snatched and smoked when a DI decided the post looked “too fucking relaxed.”

  Back in the squad bay, Cervantes ran his circles like a quiz show hosted by a man who hated fun. He hammered general orders, rank recognition, Corps history. When a kid stumbled, the platoon paid—on their faces, on the line, sweat hitting tile like rain. Some nights, between questions, Cervantes let a story slip the leash, one night regaling them in his last war story.

  “You can only trust the men to the left and right of you out there.” He had everyone’s undivided attention. “I remember, my last tour to Da Nang; we were working with a shadow outfit that didn’t play by the rules. Completely off the books. They had us out there combing the forest while they did god-know-what. 8 months, only for them to—“ His eyes would gloss, he’d lean back crossing his leg. Then, shaking his head, he’d finish up. “—But we got those bastards. Buried that bitch in ‘jungle fire’.” He’d blink, and like that the killer was back. “That’s what they get for crossing the Marines, Hoorah.”

  The recruits returned the war cry. “Hoorah!”

  Cervantes smiled once, mirthless, when a recruit asked what happened to them. “You don’t want to see ‘em, that’s for sure. They’ll never forget fucking with the Marines.”

  Outside of training, life on the depot was not too different from the civilian world. Laundry alternated weekly; ‘laundry recruits’ they were called. It ran like a factory: sort, wash, fold, fight for machines, defend your platoon’s pile with your life. Recruits were expected to get weekly haircuts and had access to go to the base exchange for toiletries and hygiene. When alone, they walked with speed and intensity; if they weren’t in groups, they were expected to march with one calling cadence.

  On Sundays, if the schedule made an opening, the company squeezed into church, Protestant, Catholic, sometimes just quiet. Harris ran the weekly school circle like it was a briefing on reality. He’d sit them down in a semi-circle, voice low, eyes hard, and talk about the outside world: layoffs at home, headlines about Washington, leftover blood from Southeast Asia no one wanted to mop. He handed out letters like they weighed ten pounds each. Tyson’s name didn’t get called, and that was by design. A clean record bought you a quiet life, for now.

  “Still nothing, bro?” Recruits drifted aimlessly through the squad bay; Grenados leaned up against the racks. “It’s been, what, three weeks?”

  Tyson dug through his footlocker, “It’s how it’s supposed to be.” The top trays were organized with stationary class materials. For the last hour before ‘lights out’ they were allowed ’square-away time’, if they weren’t in trouble. “I’m not supposed to be here.”

  “None of us are, cabrón. But we are. They’re probably worried.”

  “They probably wait for my death. I’m the ‘enemy’ now. At least to them.” Tyson riffled through notebooks of history notes and ranks.

  “How do you know if you won’t even write them and find out?”

  Tyson changed the subject. “Running shoes, finally,” he pulled them from the bottom of the footlocker. “They’re a little stiff, but hey, beats those ‘Chuck Taylors’.” He laced them with reverence and tossed the Converse to the bottom of the bin.

  “It’s the boots that confuse me.” Granados rolled his neck, stretching on the bed frame. “I don’t get why we have two pairs.”

  “One for garrison, one for the bush.” Tyson started on the second shoe.

  “Don’t oil them—oil them a lot—break ‘em down—don’t you fucking dare.” Alex shook his head. “It’s confusing. Their orders are mostly shouted contradictions.”

  There was a lull in the conversation, then Alex picked right back up. “Look, just write the letter. You don’t even have to send it. I’m sure you have a lot to tell them. It might help you deal with things that come up while you’re here. I can’t imagine not talking to my mom or my sister.”

  #

  They trained first aid in the classroom that week—gauze, pressure dressings, tourniquets. The corpsman tossed an olive-drab pouch onto the table. Tyson noticed the stamps on the packets as they were passed hand to hand: a stylized C intertwined with an R and a D, inked small on the corner of sterile gauze, on a foil packet of hemostatic powder, on a tiny pair of shears with blunt tips. The instructor said the name like it was common. “Caliber Research and Development. Government contract. Don’t waste the fucking bandages.” The words slid past most people. Tyson filed it away without knowing why.

  The whiskey locker lived behind a wooden door near the duty hut, a cave of splinters and cracks where the platoon’s lifeblood, its training gear, stacked and toppled.

  Barientes owned it like a dragon owned its hoard. He never smiled, but his eyes warmed a degree when he talked inventory. In week two, he tapped three bodies with his swagger stick. “You, you, and Graves. You’re my new Whiskey pigs, got that? You don’t belong to the platoon anymore; you belong to me. If I say wake up, you were never asleep.”

  Tyson didn’t argue.

  “Your job is to manage the platoons’ training materials. Our mats and pads for CQC and break falls. All that good shit.” He walked them through the space. Rows of Polish and cleaning materials; excess razors and aftershave, stacks of body pads and floor mats; all neatly stacked and aligned. “Pretty soon we gotta prepare to move up north. All this shit needs to find a new home.”

  The whiskey pigs followed with their eyes in silent obedience.

  “Find me boxes, you understand? Not shit boxes, either. Boxes that don’t disintegrate when you sneeze at ‘em. We move in two weeks.”

  The first midnight note came tucked under the duty log: GRAVES - 01:00, ALVAREZ - 23:00, WELLS - 22:00— IN THE LOCKER.

  Tyson felt the tap on his shoulder and his eyes sprang open. “I’m not on the fire watch list!” His whisper was powerful.

  “It’s not for fire watch. Barientes wants you in the whiskey locker. Get dressed.”

  He slid out of his rack, dressing promptly, then slipped into the wooden cell. Barientes had left a list that read like a punishment and a prayer: count, coil, stage, inspect. The count and coil were already done, just the stage and inspection portion remained. Tyson’d just finished placing the equipment on the shelves neatly when Barientes walked in; bright-eyed. He ignored Tyson at first, circling the room to inspect. “Very good, recruit. You’ve set the bar high.” By now, Barientes turned to face Tyson, who knew now not to make eye contact. “This is how I expect to see this room every day.” Barientes began picking fabric off Tyson’s shoulder. “I have a very high expectation, and a very short temper.” The drill instructor hemmed Tyson up by his collar, lifting him slightly in the air. “If my whiskey locker’s fucked up, you’re fucked up. Got it?” He sat Tyson back down, and smoothed the wrinkles out of his blouse, exiting the room.

  Mornings in the barracks were the most chaotic time of day. All lights flicked on simultaneously at 04:00, when reveille sounded through the loudspeakers. Drill instructors were already running between the racks, screaming and spitting. “Wake up! Wake up! Get the fuck up, get online!” Heel and toe taps clicked across the tile.

  Recruits scrambled to their feet, each sleeping head to toe, rolling out to their left, scurrying to the edge of their footlockers.

  From the quarterdeck, SSgt Harris waited, hands on his waist. “Count off!”

  From the front of port, across the back of the bay, up to the front of the starboard, the recruits counted off, ending with the last. “Staff Sergeant, 68 souls on deck!”

  They proceeded through the morning routine: head-calls, hygiene, shaving — all by the numbers. Getting dressed was the same way, Drill Instructors counting backwards as fast as they could to rush the process.

  “Blouse! Blouse! On the body, do it now…”

  The recruits took a breath.

  “Move!” He counted back rapidly from 30, skipping numbers as he went. “5, 4, 3, 2, 1 — you should be —“

  “Done, Staff Sergeant!”

  They formed out front of the barracks to march to chow. The mess hall sat a short distance from the barracks, behind a chain-link cage on wheels that caught broken-down cardboard in the mornings like a trawl net. From the corner of his eye, he made out the contents of the cage: boxes. Boxes. Hundreds of boxes of various sizes sat idly. Before the company’s first move up to Pendleton, Barientes tossed the whiskey pigs a problem. The obvious answer was the cage.

  Barientes must have seen it too. During square away time, Tyson noticed him talking to Wells across the bay. Wells silently acknowledged an order before Barientes disappeared into the hut. Before ‘lights’, every Marine sang the first verse of the Marine’s Hymn and drank a full canteen. A ’toast’ to the Marine Corps. They secured their rifles in the stands behind their racks, then pealed back the wool, green blankets. In the distance, fireworks could be heard. Every night at light out, like clockwork. Sea World. Before ‘lights’, Tyson’s bladder sounded an alarm, which had him on his feet. Wells was on his feet, too, dipping out the front hatch.

  When it came time to issue gear, he knew where Wells had been that morning. New boxes, small cubes, roughly 3x4 and 2x2, decorated the shelves. “These aren’t what Barientes had in mind.” Boxes from the cage were wrong: too slick, too small, torn to hell. While he was in the locker, he attempted fitting objects into the new receptacles. No luck. “Barely big enough for our sunblock.”

  From the doorway, Barientes seemed to come to the same conclusion. “Tomorrow morning, I want you to go back and find bigger boxes, Graves. We’re running out of time.”

  Noon chow rolled around, Tyson studying the steel cage as closely as he could without being obvious. There was no way. Nothing in that cage looked like an appropriate size. That made no sense. Of all the food that was being delivered to the chow hall, all the people he needed to support, how was it stocked by such small items? He made his way through the line, cafeteria style, and saw them. Leaned up against the wall. Kellogg. The box was big and deep. That’s what he was looking for. His head cut left and right. Drill instructors all around. Now wasn’t the right time, but soon. He knew the exact time.

  After chow, there was line training. “This is the ‘Close Combat Curriculum! Developed by Gunnery Sergeant Bill Miller in the 1950s. It integrates karate, judo, taekwondo, boxing, and jujutsu. It focuses on lethal efficiency, designed to teach Marines how to kill quickly and decisively in close quarters.” Line Instructors were brutal beasts in ‘boot and utilities’. Break-falls, tosses, sweeps, jabs, pushes, stomps, and chokes. One mind, one weapon. “In the coming weeks, we will talk about bayonet and knife fighting. Formation, a march to the showers, another class — the days were quick and productive.”

  Sleep found Tyson swiftly, promptly after his head struck the pillow. Rest was fleeting, short-lived, woken to gentle nudges on his shoulder.

  “Hey.” It was Grenados. “Barientes wants you in the steel cage. Get dressed.”

  Tyson knew they wouldn’t be there. It was pointless to climb in the cage, sifting for bigger boxes, but who was he to argue? He rolled out of the rack and suited up.

  The walk to the cage was short. Facing the chow hall, a ladder provided easy access to its interior. Tyson was right. “Nothing larger than a shoebox. Just like what Wells brought back.” His body settled into the cardboard nest. Relaxed. The air was cold. Comfortable, but cold. What time is it? What day? Did it matter? From around the corner, a gust of wind whipped a cloud of cigarette smoke and some chuckles. Chow hall workers?

  Revelry sounded. Tyson sat on the lip of that cage listening to the barracks explode. Showers slammed, boots stomping, distant thunder from the stacks of quarterdecks. It was a symphony of discipline, a chorus of Satans conductors; the weeping and moaning, and gnashing of biblical teeth——until the chaos thinned. Time. It was worth the effort to see. What harm could asking do? He walked around to the back of the chow hall, following the scent of cigarettes.

  “Hello,” he waved, words having already disrupted the laughter.

  Their eyes screamed concern and curiosity, but not enough for their mouths to respond.

  “The cereal boxes. Those bid Kellogg boxes,” he stepped forward slowly, sizing them with his hands, “we sure could use some of them. As many as you can spare for a move we have coming up… if it’s not too much to ask…”

  They turned to face each other, “Well, we just stocked, like—“ one began

  “I cleared 12 boxes, Shanon gave me hers.”

  “—so that leaves—“ he counted on his fingers. “We can spare, like, 20? Will that work?”

  Around the side, by the door, 20 boxes stood propped, flattened, against the wall. It took three trips to line them up outside the squad bay: boxes that didn’t fold when you looked mean at them. Barientes met him at the hatch, eyes on the stacks, then on Graves. “Wells, Alvarez, take these to the whiskey locker.”

  “Aye Aye, Staff Sergeant.”

  That night, the whiskey pigs moved all the platoon’s loose equipment to moving boxes.

  “Issue all the gear from the box, replace it when the recruits bring my shit back. If everything is already packed, there’s less to do.” This was Barientes’ plan.

  Straps nested in straps, helmets kissed foam, ponchos folded like razors. Tyson drew a map in his head of every item’s home and slept with the schematics under his skull, and left simple markings for each item.

  By week three, he could open a crate by touch and tell if it was short by the sound. It wasn’t affection, but it was something like respect when Barientes nodded once and grunted, “Don’t make me tell you twice. Tyson’s hands learned the hardware quickly—buckle teeth, web strap scars, the way canteens clicked in a stack.

  Soon it was swim week. MCRD San Diego had the biggest pool that Tyson had ever seen. It would have been magnificent, if Tyson could swim. Swim qual instructors, unlike the line instructors, were not Drill Instructors — not all of them, not these in any case. Like SSgt Harris, they introduced themselves, their qualifications, and years of experience. Tyson and Alex weren’t paying attention.

  “It’s Olympic Class, for sure,” Granados was impressed. “I’ve been swimming my whole life. This is going to be fun.” He nudged Graves, who looked like he stared at his grave.

  “I’m not looking forward to it.” The two mastered a technique of whispering during presentations, which was proving useful. Tyson spied the high dive. “How tall would you say that is? 15? 20 feet?”

  “Nice.” Alex was beyond excited, sizing it up. “20 feet for sure.”

  “This is going to be bad…”

  “Oh, come on, it can’t be as bad as your week as the guide.” Alex’s favorite little jab.

  “Hey, they never told me the rules of being the guide. I didn’t know the platoon was done eating when I was done eating. It’s okay, whiskey locker’s fine, too, but this — ? This could literally kill me, man.”

  “I’ll pass on the job every time. I don’t want the attention. I just wanna get outta here.” Alex watched the platoon stand and nudged Tyson, who still stared at the high dive.

  The pool’s chlorine stung the air, and the water was a blue mouth. “Line up! From here to here, just the shallow end. I want you to swim across. Don’t touch the bottom. I’ll see it. Once you do that, you’ll pass swim qual level one; then you’ll tread water, and if you manage that for 2 minutes, you’ll drop from the high dive. If you can’t swim across the shallows, you’ll be sent back to the barracks for the rest of the day, and you’ll try again tomorrow.”

  Group by group, the recruits plunged into the pool, most of them swimming, some of them well. But not the Black recruits in Bravo Company 1028. If there were to be a flail, a thrash, or struggle, it was likely one of the ‘dark green’ Marines.

  “Next!”

  One by one, Tyson’s group took the leap off the edge of the pool into the blue. Now or never. His world was swallowed into a world of blue muffles. White foam and bubbles expanded from Tyson’s blouse and trousers, and he felt his feet plant on the bottom. He laid his body across the swim lane and kicked off, mimicking the recruits around him. He fluttered his feet like he’d seen on TV, but it was no good. He was sinking fast, fighting the water like it was a man. It didn’t care. The first day he walked the bottom and came up coughing bleach and pride.

  “Outta the pool!” There were rapid whistle tweets. Tyson didn’t question who they were talking to.

  The failures were formed up and made to march back to the squad bay where they showered, changed, and scrubbed the decks, waiting for the platoon to finish. They knew better than to fail and come back with idle hands, though it didn’t seem to matter for Tyson.

  Shoe-taps snapped right up to Tyson, cleaning the floors of the head. “On your fucking feet, Graves.”

  Tyson stood, dropping the scrub brush, snapping to attention.

  Cervantes was shorter than Tyson, but ferocious. “What kind of operation do you think we’re running here?”

  “This recruit doesn’t understand the question, Sergeant.”

  “No, you wouldn’t get it, would you? Because you’re fucking incompetent, right?”

  “Yes, Sergeant!”

  “And you must think I’m fucking stupid, too, ain’t that right?” Tyson couldn’t make out Cervantes’s face, due to the campaign cover. “I want you to know I’m serious. Get five-foot-eight right now!”

  Tyson bent down at his knees, just low enough to see Cervantes’s eyes.

  “You can’t be a leader of Marines and incompetent in any aspect. Suppose one of those men — say it was Wells, or Alvarez — slipped and fell into the pool. Suppose it was your fucking job to save them, either of them. You couldn’t even save yourself.”

  “Aye—“

  “I saw the way you shit yourself at the edge of the pool, afraid. Like a fucking coward—“

  “—Aye—“

  “—I think you and the rest of these dark green toads are about the most useless—“

  “—Sergeant!“

  “—we’ve ever had to the fleet, in all my years of serving in it. It’s right there in the fucking title, ‘marine’ as in ‘of the fucking sea’—“

  Tyson kept agreeing, louder and faster. It’s all he could do: answer the question as they flew and take the reprimand. The last thing he wanted was to make another Drill instructor feel as if Cervantes needed help.

  “You’re a weak piece of shit, and you’re out of my whisky locker, Graves. Effective immediately. Next time you fail swim qual, you better fucking drown.” Cervantes turned, leaving the bathroom, kicking over a mop bucket with standing water. The rest of the platoon was done with swim qual for the day, walking through the head to shower. That was about as far as cleaning was probably going to go for the moment.

  Staff Sergeant Barientes led the evening’s school circle. “Hey, get me two of those footlockers and stack them up here.” He motioned to two recruits. “Hey, school circle, on me, do it now. Move. Sit down, and shut the fuck up.” His face was always narrowed; always angry. “OK, so, once you get out to the Fleet, you might end up serving aboard a Naval vessel, on a MEU.” He sat, half on the haphazard stack, his leg cocked. “That’s ‘Marine Expeditionary Unit’. MEU. That’s on a Navy ship, for some of you idiots, in here.” He looked around and found Tyson.

  “That means you need to know how to fucking swim. Even you dark-green Marines.” There were quiet snickers around the room, but they were hushed. “I know a guy once. We were on a ship together, drilling holes in the Pacific. This guy gets sick, runs to puke overboard, slips and ends up sliding overboard; straight into the Pacific fucking Ocean.” Barientes paused for a moment. “Now, he wasn’t like our dark-greens from today.” There was a laugh, “He was a master swimmer, but he wasn’t keeping pace with an ocean liner.”

  There was a laugh, again brief.

  “‘Man overboard’ they cried from the crow’s nest, but it wasn’t a short process. We’re steaming along at 30 - 40 knots; make time. And the shock and sting of the Pacific? Shit, it’s always cold. But he remembered his training.” Barientes wiped his nose and leaned close, eyes darting to each ‘dark-green’ then resting on Tyson. “Your uniform holds air. When it’s wet, it’s air-resistant. That means when you’re submerged in water, if you duck your head under and water, you can air your blouse up. Come back out and take a deep breath and do that as often as you need to. Remember that.” His eyes stayed glued on Graves.

  Evening rituals played out, the Marines having their nightly toast, then climbing into their racks. Tyson was deep in dreamland long before he was awakened for Whisky Pig duty. It was the same gentle nudge on his shoulder.

  “Barientes got you on the list for the whiskey locker.”

  “I don’t work in the whiskey locker anymore, it must be an old list.” He rolled over with a huff, finding sleep swiftly.

  The next attempt was not gentle, a wool blanket ripped from the rack as Tyson found himself hemmed up by his collar, once again by Barientes; his brow furrowed tightly. “Get up, get dressed, and get the fuck in my whiskey locker!” His body dropped to the bed, tense with fear.

  He knew better than to rub his eyes when he walked into the locker. Barientes was there, waiting. “Get in here, close the door. Since when do we ignore posted duty?”

  “This recruit was fired by Sergeant Cervantes—“

  “But did I fire you?!” There was a break in the tension. Barientes snatched a clipboard from the shelf and shoved it into Tyson’s chest.

  “No, Staff Sergeant…”

  “That’s right. Shut up and count my shit.”

  Another morning blurred, coalescing into the stinging smell of chlorine and bleach. Back at the pool, seated in the bleachers, the crowd was much smaller today.

  “Welcome back, recruits. Today is the beginning of the remedial swim qual. We’ll give you the choice!” The corporal stepped back and motioned for the shallow end. “We’ll spend a day with you down here in the shallow end, teaching you the basics, and then tomorrow you can try to swim across again; if you fail again, though, you will be dropped in training. Or,” he motioned for the high dive. “Take your chances on the plunge, and if you make it back to the edge, we’ll give you the basic swim qual, and you can go back to the barracks.”

  The tower loomed over everything at the pool, awful and powerful. If Alex were here, he’d tell them to just go for it, but Tyson knew he didn’t know how to swim. Was blowing up his blouse really the answer? The recurring question in his mind: What have I got to lose?

  “Who’s taking the plunge?”

  Tyson’s hand shot in the air along with about half the other recruits. There would be another wait, which the waiting was what he couldn’t stand. One step at a time, he envisioned the steps he’d take on his way down, finding time to inflate himself before the cold waters of the pool overtook him. He was mistaken, but not by much.

  Deep, further down in water than he’d ever been in his life, he’d found clarity. Time stood still, merely an afterthought, as he found answers to his own personal puzzles, then unraveled them into more riddles. Tucking his neck, he tested yesterday’s knowledge, pumped air into his blouse, rising quickly to the surface with a splash. He didn’t fight it; there was no need.

  “—Move! Get the hell outta the way—”

  “—Make way for the next diver—”

  He’d forgotten where he was, doggy paddling in the worst form towards the closest edge, but he’d survived. Cold, dripping wet, trembling in the January cold. But alive, nonetheless.

  Staff Sergeant Harris was mostly missing during swim week, showing sporadically until Thursday and Friday. These days, he’d dedicate extra time to working with the platoon to prepare for their drill meet and inspection that Saturday. Drill was a subject he was quite enamored with. “It’s all about the call and the instant response.” He’d tell them, repeating the catchphrase “instant, willingness, obedience to orders” with every heel strike of the deck. “Pivot! Pivot! Pivot,” he watched their movements like a hawk, scrutinizing every move, every small detail. “…Attention to detail, recruits.” He didn’t shout while they drilled. He saved his voice for sing-song cadences and pain.

  The first competition was a disaster—guidon drooped, pivots sloppy, one private let the staff fall until it kissed the deck. Harris didn’t lose his mind. He lost theirs. He made the platoon look like receiving-week garbage for two days straight: skivvies on, racks ripped, bodies smoked until sweat polka-dotted the tile.

  He introduced them to the ‘platoon smoke session’, an event where the guidon dictated our exercise; shifting us through burpees, pushups, crunches, jumping jacks, and a 100-yard sprint. “You don’t let the flag touch the deck!” His face twisted in maniacal laughter as he reeled back, launching the spear through the sky like a missile, then stood back in a pose watching us scramble for it.

  By the end of the month, the uniform felt different on his skin. Not softer, never that, but tailored to the man he was becoming. He and Granados learned each other’s rhythms without words: who squared which corners, who smoothed the covers, who cracked first when laughter shook in their ribs at the worst possible time. They ate fast and dishonestly—stealing seconds from the next man’s breath—and then ran to make up the sin.

  On the morning of the inspection, the company mustered on the PFT course in rare form. The sun burned pale, and the wind was knife-cold. Tyson’s arches didn’t scream. His lungs did. He ran in step anyway, left-right-left like a drum-line, Granados’s breath keeping time above him. The cadence called out, filthy and funny, and the platoon laughed with their legs, shouting its echo.

  “—mama and papa were lying in bed; mama rolled over, and this is what she said—“

  When they marched back into the bay, Barientes was waiting at the hatch with that clipboard and that look. He didn’t hand it to Tyson, tossing it like a frisbee; Tyson catching it in his chest, unflinching. Somewhere between the first yellow footprints and this moment, something in him had hardened. Not dead. Not yet. But colder. The song under his breath was quieter. The keys under his fingers were further away, but the rhythm still pulsed.

  Sunday, the trucks rolled up to take their gear to Pendleton. Not seven tons, but box trucks. Tyson and the whisky pigs were in charge of the move, staging the gear for the transport, marking gear counts without being told. Barientes watched everything, nodding, his face narrowed into angry approval, arms crossed.

  Cervantes watched too, an angry scowl of his own. “You know, I fired him?”

  “Yeah, he mentioned it. I hired him back.”

  Cervantes laughed. “You know I’m just gonna keep fucking with him, right? He’s fired again the moment the truck is offloaded at Pendleton.”

  “Yeah. I know.”

  “Good, so long as you know.”