Chapter Five – What Hunts in the Dark
Adam found the camp just before full nightfall.
The forest thinned into a shallow basin ahead, trees pulled back as if unwilling to witness what had been done there. Smoke rose in a lazy column, thick and dark even in the damp air. Firelight flickered between trunks, throwing long, warped shadows that moved too smoothly to belong to beasts.
Humanoids.
Adam dropped low and slowed his breathing.
The ground here was churned and packed hard—boot prints layered over one another, deep grooves where a cart had been dragged in and turned. The trail ended exactly at a quickly thrown together camp.
Raiders.
He crouched behind a fallen log and focused, letting his awareness spread outward. The world sharpened, details popping into place—the way light spilled unevenly, the rhythm of movement, the subtle gaps in attention. The way he and his fellow operators focused right before action during an encounter.
Something clicked in his mind and the system replied with a gentle ding.
SKILL UNLOCKED – STEALTH (Lv.1)
Reduces detection when moving carefully and deliberately.
Adam didn’t smile at acquiring a new skill.
He moved.
The camp was laid out in a rough ring. Ten drow total. Young. Lean. Full of hatred for those different and not showing much experience even when all armed. All confident that these lesser beings couldn’t harm them.
Adam worked his way around the perimeter.
The first drow stood watch near the tree line, pale skin almost blue-gray in the firelight, silver-white hair pulled tight behind sharp features. He leaned on a spear like the world owed him comfort, crimson eyes scanning lazily rather than watching.
Identify flickered.
Drow Raider
Level: 6
Threat: Moderate
Notes: Overconfident. Light armor.
Adam came up behind him, one hand clamping over the drow’s mouth, the other driving a brutal strike into the base of his skull severing it from his spine.
The body went limp.
Adam lowered him gently to the ground.
“One,” he whispered.
The second drow sat on a log, laughing with another, teeth sharp, voice dripping with disdain as they spoke in a language Adam understood due to his communications skill.
“…filthy little animals,” one sneered, glancing toward the fire. “They cry the same in every tongue.”
Adam’s jaw tightened.
He slipped forward, shadow to shadow, timing his movement with a gust of wind that rattled leaves overhead. His fist crashed into the first drow’s throat as it turned at the sound, crushing cartilage. The second barely had time to turn before Adam drove a knee into his face hard enough to snap his head back.
Damage Taken: Shallow cut across forearm from a panicked slash.
Adam ignored it.
“Three,” he murmured.
A pair were arguing near a supply crate about how many slaves they would receive—both were dropped before they realized they weren’t alone.
Another sharpening blades, humming to himself—Adam broke his wrist, then his neck.
One spotted him at the last second, loosing a crossbow bolt that tore across Adam’s ribs.
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Damage Taken: Deep laceration. Bleeding.
Adam hissed but kept moving, driving forward, smashing the drow into the dirt and finishing it with a downward strike that left his knuckles numb.
By the time he reached the center of the camp, only three remained.
That’s when he saw them clearly.
The children.
Huddled together near the fire, wrists bound, eyes wide and hollow with shock. Soot streaked their faces. One of the smaller ones clutched another, shaking silently.
And beside them—
An orc.
Broad shoulders slumped beneath torn clothes, wrists bound in iron manacles that dug into green-gray skin already bruised and bloodied. His bald head was bowed, thick black beard matted with dirt and blood, braided despite everything. One eye was swollen shut.
The other burned pale blue.
Watching.
Waiting.
The remaining drow stood together now.
Their leader stepped forward—taller, clad in darker armor etched with cruel runes. His expression twisted when he saw Adam fully.
“A human?” he scoffed. “Alone?”
The two beside him laughed.
“I smell blood,” one said. “And no class tag.”
The other sneered. “You’re nothing without the System holding your hand.”
Something in Adam snapped.
He straightened, blood dripping freely now, chest heaving as pain roared through his body.
“You took kids,” Adam said, voice shaking with fury. “You burned a village.”
The leader rolled his shoulders lazily. “They’re resources. And you’re—”
Adam moved.
Muscle memory took over.
He charged, slipping inside the leader’s first strike and driving a straight punch into his face. Bone cracked. He took a blade across the thigh from the left—
Damage Taken: Severe cut. Mobility impaired.
—but he kept going, spinning, elbow smashing into the second drow’s temple. The third drove a dagger into Adam’s shoulder.
Damage Taken: Penetrating wound.
Adam roared and slammed his head forward, feeling cartilage collapse beneath his forehead. The leader staggered back, fear flashing across his eyes for the first time.
Adam followed.
Blow after blow. Blood. Mud. Pain screaming from every nerve.
The leader raised his weapon—
Adam caught it, snapped it aside, and drove his fist through the drow’s throat with everything he had left.
“HOO-YAH, MOTHERFUCKER,” Adam snarled as the body dropped.
Silence fell.
Adam stood there swaying, vision narrowing.
The camp went quiet in a way that felt wrong.
Fire crackled softly at the center, sparks lifting into the damp night air before dying. Smoke drifted low, stinging Adam’s eyes as he stood amid the bodies, chest heaving, blood soaking into the mud beneath his boots.
He didn’t hear the rain anymore.
He heard breathing.
His own—ragged, uneven—and the soft, terrified whimpers of the children huddled near the fire.
Adam turned slowly, the motion sending a spike of pain through his ribs that made his vision blur. His hands were shaking now, fists clenched so tight his nails bit into his palms.
Eight kids.
Too small. Too thin. Eyes too old for their faces.
One of them flinched when Adam looked their way, instinctively curling inward as if expecting another blow.
That hurt more than the knife in his shoulder.
“Hey,” Adam said hoarsely, forcing his voice down, steady despite the tremor in his hands. “It’s okay. I’m not—”
His words faltered as his gaze shifted.
The orc.
He was slumped against a crude wooden post, chains biting deep into his wrists. Torn clothes hung from his frame in strips, stained dark with old blood and ash. One knee was swollen badly, skin split and angry. Bruises mapped his torso in ugly purples and blacks.
But his posture—
Adam noticed that immediately.
Despite everything, the orc wasn’t collapsed. His back was straight. His shoulders squared as much as the chains allowed. His head lifted slowly as Adam turned toward him.
Pale blue eyes locked onto Adam’s.
Not pleading.
Not afraid.
Assessing.
Adam swallowed.
“You held,” Adam said quietly, more observation than praise.
The orc’s jaw tightened. His voice, when it came, was rough but controlled. “They wanted me broken,” he said. “Didn’t finish the job.”
Adam nodded once. “Good.”
A sudden wave of dizziness washed over him.
He staggered, catching himself on one knee. Blood dripped steadily now from the gash in his thigh, pooling darkly in the mud.
The System stirred faintly at the edge of his vision, numbers flickering uselessly as his focus wavered.
Not now.
Adam forced himself back to his feet, ignoring the screaming protest from his leg. He moved toward the children, every step heavy, measured.
“I’m going to get you out,” he said, voice strained but certain. “All of you.”
One of the older kids—a boy maybe twelve—met his gaze, eyes wide and searching. “Are… are they all gone?”
Adam looked back at the fallen drow.
“Yes,” he said. “They’re gone.”
The boy nodded once, lips pressed tight, as if afraid to say more.
Adam turned back toward the orc, reaching into his Subspace by instinct. His vision tunneled as he pulled out a blade to work the lock, fingers clumsy now.
“I’m going to get you loose,” he said. “Just—”
The orc shook his head sharply. “Children first.”
Adam paused.
“I can—”
“Children,” the orc repeated, voice firm despite the weakness beneath it. “I can wait.”
Adam stared at him for a long moment.
Then he smiled faintly. “Yeah,” he murmured. “I figured you’d say that.”
He turned back toward the kids.
And that’s when his body finally betrayed him.
The adrenaline that had carried him through the fight burned out all at once, leaving only pain and exhaustion in its wake. His left leg buckled. His hands went numb.
The world tilted violently.
“Stay—” Adam tried to say, but the word slurred.
He saw the orc strain against his chains, eyes widening.
“Human—!”
Adam took one more step toward the fire.
Then the darkness surged up and swallowed him whole. The world tilted, went dark, and Adam Commeree collapsed into the mud as consciousness finally claimed its due.

